Comments on: Digital Short #1 – REMASTER http://www.mumbaiconfidential.com crime-noir comic book created by Saurav Mohapatra and Vivek Shinde Sat, 17 Dec 2011 01:23:03 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3 By: MUMBAI CONFIDENTIAL: A new comic by Saurav Mohapatra « Chilli Pepper Chutney http://www.mumbaiconfidential.com/shorts/01-remaster/comment-page-1/#comment-1021 MUMBAI CONFIDENTIAL: A new comic by Saurav Mohapatra « Chilli Pepper Chutney Sat, 12 Nov 2011 21:34:27 +0000 http://www.mumbaiconfidential.com/?page_id=217#comment-1021 [...] in the series- Good Cop, Bad Cop is available for  at download along with a a digital short Digital Short #1, set in the same universe. So far, the comic has been downloaded 1000 times and the short has been [...] [...] in the series- Good Cop, Bad Cop is available for  at download along with a a digital short Digital Short #1, set in the same universe. So far, the comic has been downloaded 1000 times and the short has been [...]

]]> By: Indisch http://www.mumbaiconfidential.com/shorts/01-remaster/comment-page-1/#comment-561 Indisch Wed, 29 Sep 2010 09:35:45 +0000 http://www.mumbaiconfidential.com/?page_id=217#comment-561 The artwork is awesum! But I find the lines a bit forced at times... can we have Arjun just think his thoughts and not speak them aloud (maybe in bubbles or italics)? He comes across John Abraham trying to play Nana Patekar. And right from the start his lines give the feeling of being insincere. Brevity is the key. Can we please cut out some lines that are not needed? Let the reader come up with the lines on his own. The artwork is good enough to let him do that. Please let's have the dialogues reconsidered. The narration is pretty solid though. Very good start. Promising. The artwork is awesum! But I find the lines a bit forced at times… can we have Arjun just think his thoughts and not speak them aloud (maybe in bubbles or italics)? He comes across John Abraham trying to play Nana Patekar. And right from the start his lines give the feeling of being insincere. Brevity is the key. Can we please cut out some lines that are not needed? Let the reader come up with the lines on his own. The artwork is good enough to let him do that. Please let’s have the dialogues reconsidered. The narration is pretty solid though. Very good start. Promising.

]]> By: vinay brahmania http://www.mumbaiconfidential.com/shorts/01-remaster/comment-page-1/#comment-427 vinay brahmania Fri, 02 Jul 2010 05:49:11 +0000 http://www.mumbaiconfidential.com/?page_id=217#comment-427 great stuff guys great read great art great stuff guys great read great art

]]> By: Quickshots from Twitter (2010-07-02)Saurav Mohapatra – comic book writer | Saurav Mohapatra - comic book writer http://www.mumbaiconfidential.com/shorts/01-remaster/comment-page-1/#comment-426 Quickshots from Twitter (2010-07-02)Saurav Mohapatra – comic book writer | Saurav Mohapatra - comic book writer Fri, 02 Jul 2010 04:41:08 +0000 http://www.mumbaiconfidential.com/?page_id=217#comment-426 [...] @Zudacomics. At least the format lives on — http://mumbaiconfidential.com/shorts/01-remaster/ [...] [...] @Zudacomics. At least the format lives on — http://mumbaiconfidential.com/shorts/01-remaster/ [...]

]]> By: Take Issuu with MORTAL COILS: “Godpoint” – Loose Pages http://www.mumbaiconfidential.com/shorts/01-remaster/comment-page-1/#comment-421 Take Issuu with MORTAL COILS: “Godpoint” – Loose Pages Wed, 23 Jun 2010 15:34:22 +0000 http://www.mumbaiconfidential.com/?page_id=217#comment-421 [...] I enjoy Saurav Mohapatra‘s excellent Mumbai Confidential Digital Short #1 “Remaster,” I’m also taken with the online format he’s utilizing to present the comic, Issuu.com. [...] [...] I enjoy Saurav Mohapatra‘s excellent Mumbai Confidential Digital Short #1 “Remaster,” I’m also taken with the online format he’s utilizing to present the comic, Issuu.com. [...]

]]> By: Mukesh http://www.mumbaiconfidential.com/shorts/01-remaster/comment-page-1/#comment-403 Mukesh Thu, 17 Jun 2010 19:37:47 +0000 http://www.mumbaiconfidential.com/?page_id=217#comment-403 Is reading good, Saurav. Dig the idea of shorts as a way of building the universe of MC. Cheers ! Is reading good, Saurav.

Dig the idea of shorts as a way of building the universe of MC.

Cheers !

]]> By: shounak http://www.mumbaiconfidential.com/shorts/01-remaster/comment-page-1/#comment-402 shounak Thu, 17 Jun 2010 19:17:03 +0000 http://www.mumbaiconfidential.com/?page_id=217#comment-402 Great stuff!! Great stuff!!

]]> By: mohaps http://www.mumbaiconfidential.com/shorts/01-remaster/comment-page-1/#comment-401 mohaps Thu, 17 Jun 2010 15:37:11 +0000 http://www.mumbaiconfidential.com/?page_id=217#comment-401 Dave, it's the issuu.com player. I generated the embed code off of their site. Dave, it’s the issuu.com player. I generated the embed code off of their site.

]]> By: A. David Lewis http://www.mumbaiconfidential.com/shorts/01-remaster/comment-page-1/#comment-400 A. David Lewis Thu, 17 Jun 2010 15:33:05 +0000 http://www.mumbaiconfidential.com/?page_id=217#comment-400 Great ambiance and early intrigue to the story -- and sharp art. I'm most jealous, though, of the webcomic player; it's superb! Great ambiance and early intrigue to the story — and sharp art. I’m most jealous, though, of the webcomic player; it’s superb!

]]> By: Nitin http://www.mumbaiconfidential.com/shorts/01-remaster/comment-page-1/#comment-395 Nitin Thu, 17 Jun 2010 07:51:06 +0000 http://www.mumbaiconfidential.com/?page_id=217#comment-395 Good Read guys!!! Good Read guys!!!

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